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"My Birthday..."
  by Nikkii*3


It's my birthday,
And you can't stop these tears,
The pain that they're releasing,
I've hidden for sixteen years.

You may just think i'm dumb,
But you've got no idea,
How much some things hurt,
Coming from someone you once held dear.

It's meant to be a good day,
But i'm forced to use my mask,
So my REAL friends don't see pain,
And care enough to ask...
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Date Submitted: Mar 03, 2009 (05:08 AM)
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  nooney94
03/18/09 (09:13 PM) 
HEY ITS GONNA BE OK DONT PUT YOURSELF DOWN JUST LOOK AT THE GOOD THINGS

  Sentinal
03/03/09 (04:33 PM) 
Damn, showing some real emotions in this piece. I've had bad birthdays myself but don't let them keep you down on your special day. Very nicely written though and happy birthday =]

  Ms. Nea
03/03/09 (11:42 AM) 
Happy Birthday... thingz'll get better for u.. trust me... i know EXACTLY wat u are talkin about.. im almost 18 so we on da syme page... i've had my heart broken more than i can count on my handz and some by the same people... so yeah... it'll get better...

  RedLoveSong
03/03/09 (11:35 AM) 
Happy Birthday, lady. I too am saddened by your pain..I pray that your pain is eased if just for today so that you can experience a joyous birthday today...I'm here for you D&P if you need an ear.

  BlessedOne
03/03/09 (07:28 AM) 
Happy Birthday D&P. I am so sorry for the pain that you are experiencing. I think that those people who are are REAL friends will see past the mask that you plaster on. They are keen to your emotional energy and are not fooled by outward looks. As someone who loves you, I encourage you to open up and drain that poisonous pain from within so that the healing can begin.

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