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"My black ink drips down"
  by angeleyes1


As my black ink drips down,
I see a new write is born,
Sunlight shinning down on pad,
Waiting for new life to form,
As I sit there dreaming,
My pen breathes a whisper,
A sound of sighing and love,
Leaves my heart at a quiet purr,
I turn my hand reaching,
Fingertips on my silken pen,
The eyes of my pad open,
My soul drowns within,
My pen seeking my heart again,
My hand accepts with a kiss,
All liquid jewels trickle out crying,
For all the times we missed,
Our sighs cloak the worlds demanding cries,
Clinging fresh in sensual union,
The desperate, grasping need of our release protects,
The worlds baying voice,
Forgotten,
My black ink drips down,
In the shadows of the night.



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Date Submitted: Aug 03, 2008 (04:24 PM)
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  ♥Poetic~...
08/08/08 (07:45 PM) 
wow......this was very well written. this is going on my faves for sure.

  Nikki_18
08/04/08 (08:35 PM) 
I likw how you personified the pen and pad. You gave them life...you gave your poem life. great poem.

  Chocolatezeus
08/04/08 (06:59 PM) 
enjoyed the concept of the ink and the production of such a masterpiece. The trickling of knowledge from mind to paper or screen. excellent

  ALI PHOENIX
08/04/08 (06:40 PM) 
Your poem was well thought out and my favorite part was" my pen breathes a whisper a sound of sighing and love " which has much truth because our pens is the mouth for our thoughts and emotions.

  Jody
08/04/08 (06:17 PM) 
From "All liquid jewels... to the end is my fav part. Has me in thought... I feel this. Only thing is I hate black ink! lol, blue all day, lol, but for real got me thinking of a poets pen and its potency

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