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"My Cryptic Darkness"
  by Chaotic Virgo


I want to die by a tree in the darkness; the night time can cover the ash in my eyes
I want to die while the moon’s still in harvest; or can the old man make it a surprise

As long as I’m greeted empty with freedom; with no scars to scare the angels away
Sometimes I’m in hiding my mind doesn’t need her; gagging the heart and stopping the fray

The whispers are louder when my thoughts are hazy
The taunts and the laughter, when they say I’m crazy
But what can come after, this past that has made me
the memories are faster, and the old man is lazy

All the Exiled please sing me to darkness
All the Forgotten please carry me home
All of the smiles please color them heartless
The sun it tastes bitter when you’re all alone

Sometimes I will wander away from my tree; the innocent will wonder what wrong with me
before I return with more scars on my heart; the travel has hurt me and set me apart

The girl is now laughing the old man looks on; and my sight begins to tie up my shoe
I seem to remember that my heart is gone; walking with angels and carrying you…

The whispers are louder when my thoughts are hazy
The taunts and the laughter, when they say I’m crazy
But what can come after, this past that has made me
the memories are faster, and the old man is lazy

All the Exiled please sing me to darkness
All the Forgotten please carry me home
All of the smiles please color them heartless
The sun it tastes bitter when you’re all alone

My eye lids are stolen she took them from me
How can I survive when I’m blinded in darkness
When a thing that’s so beautiful won’t let me be
The old man is taunting me….
They won’t leave…
Me alone…
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2009 (04:20 PM)
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  Monae'
11/15/09 (11:34 AM) 
Oooo. This poem is for some reason...calming. Although it doesnt have a traditional "happy" ending. I find it very calming and I think you should make a sequel. I love the motif...or motifs..there was two. Adds understanding to the poem. Very well done. 10 stars!

  Tiku
11/06/09 (12:40 PM) 
The poem has a mesmerising effect.You are outstanding in this piece.lol.

  The Awakened
10/29/09 (10:31 AM) 
This Poem is Outstanding

  Jayde Layne
10/24/09 (08:59 AM) 
Wow, this is what I call a loaded poem, it\'s so full of emotion my eyes are brimming over right now. Amazing.

  The Clinician
10/23/09 (11:34 PM) 
I must say you\'re demolishing the game right now. I\'ve never seen anything like this. You are coming strong as hell. Another favorite to add to my list. Peace and much love to ya.

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