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"My Darkened Queen ( Area 25 Obsession challenge)"
  by Group: AREA 25


Untouched,

My Darkened Queen

You
became
my
poetical
Czarina

Our
two pens amalgamated
& conjoined in unison creating
some of the tightest Metaphysical
flow ever to grace the pages of
gs poetry..

You
began reaching into my void as your
pen bled its rubicund sap, that invoked
my cerebration & began to pulsate through
my venule drawing me yet deeper into your
creativity,as it began to thaw my gelid heart
& ignite passion deep into my quintessence

Enforcing
this
Darkened Knight
to
step into

ILLUMINATION

Then
without warning
my idolatry of
you

began

Overtaking,
me as at first you became my fascination that
turned into attraction of two darkened
pens ignited by the love of
Nigritude.

Now
you are all I can think of & the mere mention of
your name causes me to asphyxiate for now you
are my

OBSESSION

I
remain forever yours, humbled
in your presence

DK LORD OF NIGRITUDE
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Date Submitted: Oct 18, 2009 (05:00 PM)
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  shibari
10/19/09 (09:39 AM) 
Nice.

  Planted Daisie...
10/18/09 (11:53 PM) 
That was truly a dark and very enticing piece...Like Mav said ...she is one hell of a writer to be obsessed with....nicely done

  คว...
10/18/09 (11:35 PM) 
awwwww....she is so wonderful huh? i guess thats why were all stalking her...lol....she makes a perfect match as queen of the night, for the lord of darkness....wonderful execution on this piece!

  leethal
10/18/09 (06:31 PM) 
very nice obsessive ink dk! you couldnt have picked a better subject to stalk than untouched! very nice scribe! i could really see this happening haha!

  Untouched_Soul
10/18/09 (06:14 PM) 
damn talk about foreplay... you tryna make me get all horny DK??? \"You began reaching into my void as your pen bled its rubicund sap, that invoked my cerebration & began to pulsate through my venule drawing me yet deeper into your creativity,as it began to thaw my gelid heart & ignite passion deep into my quintessence\" I cuold quote the whole damn piece!!!! Over;y humbled by the emotion i felt in these words. WOW

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