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"My Daydreamin..."
  by DaDutchezz


im drifting off

spaceships
coulds
bumblebees
buzzing away in the trees

waterfalls
chickens
walkin thru the fog as it thickens
no warries
jus sit back
relax

flaoting thru the skies
seein the stars
twinkle
in her eyes

more clouds
no frowns
jus ups
no downs

look at that
colgate smile
keep that up
im processin it
in my mental file

ur comin closer...
losin composure...
tryna keep my face
clear
lik glass

RIIIING!!!

man...fallin asleep aint coo!
time for my next class!
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Date Submitted: Aug 25, 2007 (01:58 PM)
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  Jicki
08/29/07 (03:41 AM) 
u have a real talent, i think. good imagery in this one and u described daydreaming real well. i liked this one too.

  *BMORES FINEST...
08/26/07 (03:40 AM) 
YO! dat wuz serious!!! lol and i espically like the end where u wuz like tyme for next class. i thought tha story wuz gonna go on. but the story wuz really gud though. great job 10strrz

  InFamouZ1
08/25/07 (10:14 PM) 
real calm approach that's how I be sometmes in class just at a complete daydream... well all the way untill the bell rings lol good write I diggs that

  j babi
08/25/07 (03:05 PM) 
man im loving it forreal girl you did the thing with this nice on liked the way you wrote this

  Prolific
08/25/07 (03:02 PM) 
i love it! i really like the way this came together... i can't even begin to try to explain how much i can relate to it. the way you trailed off the words and brought them back together to compile the whole "daydreaming" effect of being conscious but not all there was incredible! good stuff. great piece. --Prolific

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