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"My Definition of a "10"
  by Tha Scorpion


~Baby, you're luv is magnificent~

I mean even tho you're incredibly fine
The beauty that you prosess and encompass
Can't even be compared to a dyme

When I'm away from you I'm lonely
When I with you it's like I'm in Heaven
You're in my mind and my spirit 24/7

~You're the epitome of a woman~

Taking care of business in the daytime
Then you take great care of me at night
You're the pride in my heart and my sexual delight

~Baby you're one of a kind~

I love watching you get dressed
The immaculate care you exhibit
Your beauty can be summed up in one word.....esquisite

~You're fuel my fire~

Your naked feminity I gotta have it
unclothed, raw , animalistic passion
National geographic nudeness makes our sexual escapades fantastic

~I love your style~

Be it in dresses and stillettos
Or faded jeans and sneaks
You turn me on baby, your sexiness is what my sex seeks

~Pefect sexual beings~

Afternoon phone calls, lettin' me know I'm on ya mind
Delves into conversations I won't soon forget
'Bout how you thought of last night, now ya panties are soakin' wet

~You are the real~

Even when you're less than attractive
Those early morning or late nights
I still crave your internal sexiness baby, that's a Scorpion's plight

~What really makes you a "10"~

Your eyes speak to my soul
Your touch makes me feel warm
Your embrace makes us become one
Your love quiets my storm

The golden hue of your skin is perfect
The brown suger of ya hair is my pride
As you lay gently on my chest, our heartbeat's coincide

You are my joy, my excitement
You are the one, my pretty baby
Theres no if and's nor maybe
You are my lady in the streets
You are my onery freak in the sheets
My temptress, my lil sumthin' sumthin'
The essence of true luv, you are my woman






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Date Submitted: Dec 28, 2007 (07:10 PM)
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  A_New_Me
01/03/08 (07:47 PM) 
This was real nice babe..damn I wish my man ould write some shit like this about me,lol...he's not a poet...but similiar words do roll of his tongue tho...so we all good,lol. Beautiful tribute to ya wife, 10.

  sexxy brown su...
01/02/08 (03:28 PM) 
this is an absolutely wonderful piece of work! To have a man that thinks of his woman in this way, is just unimaginable and it wld make me think 2 myself how lucky i was are to have found a man like you of such love and character. A man of this form is rare and one that should be cherish and appreciate every moment you have together. I'm sure this put a smile on your wife face, but this is very beautifully written and something real from the bottom of your heart. Excellent!!

  A~BENEVOLENT~Q...
12/29/07 (11:33 AM) 
Every woman wants to be adored the way you describe your affection for your woman...You have my stamp of approval with this stanza here ...~Baby you're one of a kind~ I love watching you get dressed The immaculate care you exhibit Your beauty can be summed up in one word.....esquisite ~You're fuel my fire~ Your naked feminity I gotta have it unclothed, raw , animalistic passion National geographic nudeness makes our sexual escapades fantastic ....10stars...GG

  Unethical
12/29/07 (01:40 AM) 
awwwwwwwww..now just bottle all that up right there and we can start injecting these other dudes who cant seem to get it right lol..

  ghettopoetic15
12/28/07 (11:05 PM) 
real hott ma nig str8 10 stars

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