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"My Defintion Of Love"
  by tamara843chucktown
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The Definition Of Love by THE REALIST POET


when i wake up and get ready for the day, all i think about is you
and all the good times
bad times
emotional time we shared together
i realise that i only do it because im in love
i cant control it
cuz my heart wants to share the same beat with you
ima stick by your side through the emotional weather
and the up's and down's rollercoaster
plus when you have perfefction in ya eyes
i know that you are down foreva
your blood going fast and your heart always skip
a beat when you see me
everyword we say to eachother i know it was made with love
bay, we both are the completion to one another's life
cuz we dont act the same with anybody else
and you already told me that you cant see me with another man
or you with another girl
cuz this love for eachother was meant to be
and you are here to stay
with me so we can be down for each other foreva
i love you baby

"Love is so passionate
if you know what you
are doing with your
lover"
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Date Submitted: Aug 08, 2008 (09:54 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  koolaiid
08/20/08 (08:36 PM) 
so creative wit it. aye i kno how u felt. and it was the greatest feeling eva no doubt. but again nice piece. exceLLent write. i like tha concept all of it.

  Quite
08/12/08 (07:31 AM) 
This was amazing I love it mama

  nely
08/10/08 (01:47 PM) 
another create piece!

  Konye
08/10/08 (01:23 PM) 
Aww nicely done =]

  acknight
08/08/08 (11:45 PM) 
i like it remind me of how i feel about my ex

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