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"My Eye's Sky...The Constelation of My Loves Equation..."
  by 2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Whyte Lion..Soul Of Zion
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Cauldron Of Obsidian Restitution....Preulude 2 by 2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Whyte Li...


What words could be
explained
that retained..
enough ....
Gusto...
4 her touch
yo...

i.e..

mentally

cause
queen's
been

taken control
of
my
mentality....

carefully.....

sensually..

caressing
my
very
being
with each

verb....

word..

her's...

hit's me

right where

god

blessed me....

The Beat....
pumpin'
vitality...into me...

so u mine's
well say

she's

something like my
whole's
need...

since she

run
da
whole thing......lol....

Causing Neron's 2
Fire
in Synapsis

With the Uphoric
Undertone of
Love's
Simplistic Bliss..

Nakedness is It's
Tryst
with my Lip's

As More then Her
Hip's Gift's
I Wish
2
Aquire

She's The Lyric's Of
My Life's
Legacy
Lengthening...
Leaving Me
Lingering

In Lust's
Limbo Over looking
Passion's Reaction's...

Never Have I Experienced An Invisible Satisfaction...Such as Gazing into The Haze Her Smile Creates...

She's Heaven's
Ambrosia Plate...

And I'll Become
a
Glutton 4 Her Loving
Run This Race
Knowing Very Well Just What's At Stake
Eternal Heartbreak?
Or
Immortal
Lover's
Brace

S.U.L.T.R.Y.09'

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Date Submitted: Jun 18, 2009 (02:49 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/20/09 (03:21 AM)
Author: 2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Why...
Poem Title: Nocturnal Emission's...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  enjay
07/09/09 (07:33 PM) 
u have unique wayz of delicerin yo messagez instored in yo writez....which makez u a gud poet....10 4rm me....stay up mayne....ghost...~*N-Love*~

  That_Tiphany_T...
07/05/09 (06:10 AM) 
this rite here was fiyahh.. i love the way your pen pushes; your style is impressive and i applaud you.

  YuNeek
06/19/09 (04:52 AM) 
Beautiful. In the beginning I didn't quite understand but that's just me. I reread twice and I loved. Towards the end I really like. I can feel the love.

  Syndel
06/18/09 (07:17 PM) 
This was very romantic the kinda stuff a woman smiles from ear to ear allllll day long way into the night

  *Miss Toya*
06/18/09 (06:51 PM) 
beautiful....my favorite part was "She's The Lyric's Of My Life's Legacy Lengthening... Leaving Me Lingering In Lust Limbo Over looking Passion's Reaction's... " i'mma sukka for alliteration as we all know...that was hot...and i love the way your words flow...nice dedication to your muse :)

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