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"My Final Response To Toya"
  by D.O.X.


There was absolutely.....
nothing offensive about that haiku
so even if you did "think it was about you"
it still wasnt worth getting upset over
lmao
and we all know
that Ruby is such a reliable source of information...lol
smh
the bottom line....
you wrote that piece
as if somebody was attacking you
and nothing can be further from the truth
but the truth is
You & i both know
that you allow yourself to get worked up
about dumbshit..
dwelling only on emtotions & feelings
forgetting how to think
and its annoying
because you act as if..
i am not allowed to say things
all because they may be offensive to you
well i will constantly
not go for that
so i guess you
will continue to get offended
until you learn how to think first
and stop allowing yourself to be gassed up
by hearsay
the point of that matter
if your feelings was hurt
by "Pitty Party"....
its your own fault
if you thought it was about you....
its your own fault
because all you had to do was ask me
not ruby or anybody else
regardless to whether
i responded it to your piece or not
both of us think differently
so to assume that you know my intent....
was your error
not mine
not once have i ever beat around the bush
when addressing you
and nor will i start
so you can get off all that bullshit
and i was not dissing you
but thats how i honestly feel
thats the truth
dont act all surprised now
like i've never mentioned those things before
yeh i knew that you would probably go tit for tat
cause thats just how you are
always got somethin to prove
but the problem is
the more you try the prove something
the more evident it is that things are just the opposite
youv can listen to whoever you want to listen to
thats your choice
the only time i have a problem
is when you come at me with it
If you wanna live in a world
full of gossip. hearsay, rumors, he say she say...etc..
thats on you
but the second you step to me wit it
will be the second you get knocked on you ass
your fragile ass feelings keep getting hurt for the same reason
because you never learn
you keep doing the same shit & wonder why you get the same result
how long will you continue in the same cycle
that you know you are so tired of???
thats all on you
then you wanna act like
you are being treated so wrong
you bring shit on yourself
constantly
you know this
and i know this
but you want to keep using the same excuse
"thats just how I am"
well....when your feelings are hurt
dont blame anybody
cause thats just how you are
its called cause & effect
so whenever you truly get tired of the same effects
you will stop being the cause

***the rest of the issues mentioned, we will leave be, because that shit will go on forever....and thats not my intent on all of this***
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Date Submitted: Aug 28, 2008 (10:26 AM)
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  Red Dragon
09/03/08 (01:09 PM) 
are ya'll fighting over a haiku or is it bigger than that?

  Rosey
09/01/08 (02:19 AM) 
well. . . you slay me as well, lol, and everyone seems so tense, so jumpy, lol. Sweetheart I don't think you should entertain peoples insecurities at all, but thats just my opinion, but you definitely express yourself well, its fucked up how people are all in ya'll business and shit, but these things are certainly not gonna keep folks out. Don't let ignorance and insecurity from other poeple get you riled up. Cuz in the end, these people mean shit, less than shit, in the whole scheme of thing...
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  RUBY RED DBL R
08/29/08 (09:03 AM) 
look dox on some for real shit fuck you...... i am a reliable source.... too bad complex mentality was a fake and she is the only one that could confirm that you said you hope toya doesnt think she getting back together with you.... i put that shit on my flag, my kid's life, my life, my word whatever you wantme to swear upon because i dont lie and i dont have to gass toya up...... i cant tell toya what to do, just because she is my peoples that doesnt mean i'm in her ear, we dont have that ty...
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  African Queen
08/29/08 (08:31 AM) 
haha.....lol! sorry but this ish was crazy yo....damn!!!

  .Candice.(Roll...
08/28/08 (11:46 PM) 
last word.... *smh and laughs last damn word kid... you slay me.

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