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"My Freestylin...again!"
  by DaDutchezz


this is me
jus talkin
bout
anything...
everything...
im waitin for this storm to pass...
waitin for the cloud
to go n make someone
else's life i big mess...
im thinkin too much
but at the same time
takin the punch
i kno im prly confusin
yall...
but im jus tryna keep roll
on this ball...
.....
im tryna make everyone
happy
but in the process...
losin myself
all my feelings get put way up
high
on a shelf
as long as they good
dnt matter wats goin
on in my neck of the woods
always been that way...
prly gonna stay that way

imma shadow in this house
bleak lik a mouse
walkin...
talkin...
but nobody's listenin!
u would think
i would be used to it by now...
but ya kno..
im still waitin for somethin
that prly aint never gonna come
the day i wake up
my family tells me..
they appreciate me..

its nice to dream..
makes u feel n hope for
things that will prly never be
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2007 (04:39 PM)
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  iNTiMATE_VERSE...
08/25/07 (11:48 PM) 
this was hot; nice flow ma! keep up the good work.

  Debbie
08/23/07 (11:16 PM) 
Somewhat confusing.... As I was reading near the end I see that your family tells you to like and ou adn do. That's true and follow your heart to waht is right. Keep it up and MAY GOD BLESS YOU !!!

  sexy.beautiful...
08/23/07 (11:12 PM) 
this was a real talk poem liked the concept that u wrote about keep doing u...9 starz

  QUINNEYBABY
08/23/07 (10:52 PM) 
aye ma thats really a hot write..you really doing ur freestylin thing aren't you?? naw lol but for real hun you really killed this one...kudos to you ba...kudos

  DASTUDYUNGMONE...
08/20/07 (05:08 PM) 
i like it mamaz keep doin wat cha do ya digg

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