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"My Friend pt. 1"
  by Mints


Shes wounded, hurt done for the day

Im tryin to get her to leave but she says she must stay

you see her mind says leave but her heart refuses

I guess this is what love will do to us

she is one of my best friends but I just cant seem to make her see

that when I tell her he doesnt love you you should listen to me

he has abused you way too many times

why do you let him hold you down like your in a bind

my words I speak to you dont seem to ease his grip

she tells me shes iight but that doesnt change that he busted your lip

I cant take this no more I have to find her so called man

I want to hurt him show him pain and than do it again

Mayne I dont understand how he could do this to my friend

but its all good because I promise when we meet this will all come to a end.....
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Date Submitted: Jul 06, 2007 (04:24 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (3)
Date: 11/21/07 (10:16 PM)
Author: LilTinna
Poem Title: Your Friend

Date: 11/21/07 (10:12 PM)
Author: Group: Poetry Sistas
Poem Title: Your Friend

Date: 07/07/07 (02:32 PM)
Author: lilomelio
Poem Title: love crazy things

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comment icon  COMMENTS (23)
  lilred
06/30/09 (02:37 PM) 
Damn that was hot. I hope u keep doing your thang. I like ur writes. Gud lukin out 4 ur friend

  neceking
09/20/08 (02:29 PM) 
wow....

  Acacia
07/20/07 (03:20 PM) 
wow.. real hott.. sounds like me.. nice flow and lots of thought put in it.. madd luv...Acacia

  sexy.beautiful...
07/12/07 (11:06 AM) 
this was deep and emotional i liked it tho keep doing u as always

  Beautiful~Surp...
07/10/07 (01:32 AM) 
damn. so are u gonna beat his ass?? i hope so cuz if u dont i will! lol but this was an amazing write. its sad to kno that females go through this. me personally i dont know wat its like to love someone so much that u would accept the fact that he hit u and yet u continue to go back to him.

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