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"My Hand Hurts..."
  by Nikkii*3


So I sit and I write,
But my hand starts to ache,
The words in my heart,
Can't get to my page.

But I push through the pain,
That burns up my arm,
My thought must be known,
To my Dad and my Mum.

I say how sometimes it hurts,
'Cause i'm so far away,
And they don't ever call,
Just to say "HEY!"

Other times it's great,
I love them to bits,
When i'm with them back home,
Coz they're not gone to miss.

Wait... Even when I tell,
It seems they don't understand,
Why bother push through,
The pain in my hand...?
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Date Submitted: Mar 30, 2009 (04:53 AM)
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  Elicit
05/21/09 (08:07 PM) 
nice write i like it for the most part.

  J3LLYB3AN
05/19/09 (05:54 PM) 
love the way you expressed this hun.. you definitely did yah thing and i feel yah on this... {wif mah mom from P.R.}

  jess**ssej
05/08/09 (07:48 AM) 
i LOVE this babe

  turkeyg
03/30/09 (10:02 PM) 
yeah i have been away from my mom when i moved back home to new york and though i had fun i missed her like all hell. expression

  JokerJay
03/30/09 (04:55 AM) 
You have a lot of passion in these words. I understand what you're going through. It was like that for me when I was away from home.

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