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"My heart says it's tired"
  by shawn da 1


My heart say's he quits and he's tired of the games,

He hates the ups and downs that pain brings to the mind frame,

If it's not 100% real then he will no longer skip a beat,

Admiring beauty is for the eyes so let the brain take the time to think,

My love got the cold shoulder so now my heart will do the same,

To my real females don't worry I didn't quit I’m just not falling for a fake love or childish games,

Might be hard to open my eyes but I will ask god to help me see,

I know i need help to get over my past but visions of a brighter future i strive to see,

For now it's time for a rest and a little sleep, so crush i will but my heart will rest in the deep,

DO NOT DISTURB is on the door,

And he's knocked the hell out on the floor,

Leave me be,

And let me rest in peace

My heart used to burn with passions bright fire,

But on this day my heart say's it's tired
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Date Submitted: Jan 11, 2008 (10:08 PM)
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  jaszzy pooh
01/12/08 (05:25 PM) 
your word choice good....i really like this because youre being so real and its like the reader has to just understand what youre saying because we can feel the truth in you and its not actually in depth and extremely elaborative but yet still very visualistic(did i just make up that word? idk but i think it fits) i can see your words coming to life and your words being so vivid to be because i feel the same way and i can relate to your heart being hurt and in pain and you know being tired of a...
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