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"My Heart vs. My Mind (If Only I Had Called You...)"
  by nilla bean
  - This Poem is a response to the poem My Mind vs. My Heart by BruthaT


We Met
&
I Lost Total Composure
Wanted To Approach You
But Instead Held Back
And My Eyes Scanned Your Image

My Mind Said
I Wasn't Your Type
My Mind Said
He Wouldn't Be Attracted to YOU

All The Elements
Of
Being Rejected
By
The One That Has Internally
Generated A Cinematic Fantasy
While
I Debated On Making Eye Contact

Then YOU Spoke
&
We Flowed So Effortlessly
You Reminded Me
Of
Myself
Funny
Intelligent
Challenging
Refreshing

We Exchanged Numbers
And You Called
&
We Talked For Days
I Still Can't Believe It

All The Eelements
Of
A Relationship
With
This Man
Who
Makes My Heart Quicken
While I Debated On
How To Say What I Truly Feel

We Kissed
&
Your Lips Were Soft
Warm
Inviting
&
You Held Me
&
We Made LOVE

You Didn't Call Me
&
I Was Afraid To Call You
My Heart Said
You Wouldn't Call
Because You Got What You Wanted
&
I'm Sittin,
Wonderin,
Callin' My Best Friends
Asking How You Could Do This To Me
Then
I Move On To The Next

Tryin' To Forget
Weeds You Planted In My Mind
Tryin To Forget
Your Words
And All Your Lines
Blockin'
Mentally
Your Existence

Keepin Other Men
At A Distance

My Heart Says
Maybe...
This Time My Mind Says
Do Unto Others As They Did Unto You

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Date Submitted: Aug 28, 2008 (01:44 PM)
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  complexduplica...
09/15/08 (12:02 AM) 
oh my this was an awesome write i must say i miss reading oyur work!

  XPERIENCE
09/02/08 (12:07 AM) 
lol yeah why must yall play these games.. but i have mos def been there.. loved this drop!

  BruthaT
09/01/08 (09:45 PM) 
Hell-ov-a response Nilla Bean!! Why must we play games? Sometimes it seems hopeless for this HOPELESS ROMANTIC!! Thanks for the response!! But I can't help but feel sad!! U know I am a SAP!! Much LOVE!!

  B. Rose
08/28/08 (09:21 PM) 
IM with Scorp... another classic piece big sis... im feeling it... you need to post more though...

  Tha Scorpion
08/28/08 (01:48 PM) 
A classic Nilla Bean drop. The words pull ya in and keep ya all the way thru, nicely stated babe.

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