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"my last and final piece."
  by (*B00*)


its time
time to pack up my pen and paper
'and remove myself from unfamiliar
territory.
i am taking everything i once shared
back
this site has drained every ounce of me
and left me with nothing left to give.
with that said.
ask nothing of me
if you see me online its strictly to read some of the best poetry this site could possibly produce with the rare talent here..
dont leave me messages asking me to read something you wrote because you will be ignored. consider yourself simply
denied.
if i do comment one of your pieces
consider yourself well respected by me.
to cut this short
i will never publish another piece.
no more will i leave pieces of me behind.
now its time.
time to pack up my pen and paper.
and move on.
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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2008 (10:47 PM)
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  stayfocus3d
10/18/09 (10:42 PM) 
hope you arent serious...and i know im KINDA late but i just read some of your work and i think that you should pick that pen and pad right back up...lol...if not with us then i truly hope that you havent given up writing totally and are still expressing ur thoughts and emotions on paper for yourself...a gift should be nurtured...

  santiago\\\\\\...
07/24/09 (07:08 PM) 
your not serious are you?...... this was expression right?.. i mean ...you can't...** sniffle**... i loved the piece but not the concept cause i can't see this without you lady

  MR. BYRD
07/24/09 (06:57 PM) 
Well, I didn't know you but just viewing your pieces.....you are a great talent....I hope wherever you orchestrated your pen and pad, that you push that pen until the ink is no more...much respect young lady...Byrd

  jargon
07/17/09 (04:54 PM) 
dag, hope you come back to the pen and the pad

  vagrom
06/07/09 (01:40 AM) 
Poets always pack up pens and paper, but it's only to submerge themselves in some new territory, to feel new or different feelings; Poets can't not write, will always get their thoughts and ideas down somewhere; i just hope it's on this site so i can feel what you write...

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