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"my love if only if only"
  by young lover


I heard a knock at the door who could it be its... you some one I was not excpecting to see half pass three so no one is at the house but me, expect for you the way you rapped your arms around me all the other things in my mind went a shew in the only thing i was feelin at the momment was you the wonderful intensidy as my lips drew closer to you nothing about that scene in my life I wanted to undo it was perfect the kiss between me and you staring in your eyes my emotions my every thing became one with you, as i picked you up in caried you to my room laying in my bed, with your head on my chest in my arms around you putin my fingers threw you hiar that is well groamed watching the sun go down cause it well be night soon gave you a little kiss to remind you smilen as you siad good nite boo ,then i heard somthing at the window blew i look back down it was no more you it was my alarm clock in it was time for me too go to shcool. jordan.A.B
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Date Submitted: Sep 18, 2007 (09:52 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 06/03/08 (09:55 PM)
Author: lil'bitt
Poem Title: if only....

Date: 01/30/08 (07:08 PM)
Author: "sweet mama"
Poem Title: why me

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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  Datsexichick
11/13/08 (12:10 PM) 
hotness

  lipssolucious
03/21/08 (03:48 PM) 
yea j-dawg i finally read it happy but it wuz a gewd write

  jaylemoyne
12/11/07 (04:00 PM) 
what can i say man. just the fact that i am commenting on this poem i know you grinin. you have mad talent young.

  deja`vu
12/08/07 (11:59 PM) 
this is a great poem...so sweet....i totally give u 10starz...definetly keep up the good work...

  BabiGurl01
12/03/07 (08:15 AM) 
that is really good

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