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"MY MIND SHOUTS FOR DAYS BEFORE TIME-OUTS..."
  by MAVRICK


I took a mental journey back in the days
When NuNile, DAX and DIXIE gave waves
Where cut jeans above the knee stopped
And before the knee, was long striped tube sox
My Keds graduated to Pro Keds
And knots on the head
Were healed with butter knife indented Cross Signs on Foreheads
A big hero sandwich was taken on School trips
And frozen can sodas wrapped with Aluminum foiled frosted ice drips
Cause Dropping-Out was not even a thought, a total myth
You either Graduated or get your ass whipped
Moms, Pops and Neighbors wasn't playin that shit!
Motown laid down the law, with James Brown, Temptations, Gladys Knight and the Pips
Rockin Boomerang antennas on clean Lincoln Continental whips
With shirt collars hangin all the way down to your nips
Yeah...those days was a trip
Then I snap back to reality...
Where My Damn Spoiled Rotten Kids Make Me Wanna Gawt Damn Flip!!!
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Date Submitted: Aug 26, 2009 (02:33 PM)
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  iva
08/30/09 (03:54 PM) 
great words mav as usual

  bbeauty
08/27/09 (08:54 PM) 
THIS WAS NICE AND IT'S NICE TO GO BACK AND REMEMBER THE GOOD OLE DAYS......AND YES......IF YOU DIDN'T DO WELL IN SCHOOL THERE WAS A ROD OF CORRECTION GREETING YOU AT SCHOOL.....PARENTS DIDN'T HAVE TIME TO WAIT UNTIL YOU RETURN HOME........JUDGEMENT/PUNISHMENT TOOK PLACE AT THE PLACE WHERE YOU COMMITED THE CRIME....I LOVE THIS WRITE....B BLESS

  Laydii Lyric
08/26/09 (09:12 PM) 
loving the feel of this write

  piss a mofo of...
08/26/09 (04:31 PM) 
oh and you forgot the pleather jackets with the tassles and the blue jean jumpsuits...*cries*!!

  piss a mofo of...
08/26/09 (04:30 PM) 
*back in the day flashback*...what you say..*backhand smack*...you gone get the shit i'm gone buy or you aint gettin shit...*punch in the back*...you got anything else to say??!!...*evil look*...i didn't think so...*snaps back*...yea that spoiled shit was nothing but fantasy in the day fuck around and get beat into the future..LMMFAO...!

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