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"My Notes to you..."
  by Bugz...
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Love Notes by g-mille
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My rythm to my flow
The voice that comes out of me
thats what you are to me
the tear that you dropped in the ocean for me
well continuously be,
out there i wont be on the seek of the tears
that you cry for me,
but what i have done is drawn a tear from my eyes
and let be, in the ocean to be one with tear
so we can be one emotionally
movin on longer as days gets darker
our love for eachother shines brighter
your touch healing every pain that i ever had
your kiss oh your kiss
no one would compare to replace it
#1 fan i am
love is what i'll always show
your the pen for my paper
salt to my pepper
you bring new life to my old deaths
showin me how to love on new standards
with out you i dont ever wanna be
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Date Submitted: Aug 30, 2007 (05:43 PM)
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  g-mille
09/02/07 (02:30 PM) 
awwwwwwwwww.......i LOVED it very much!!!! i thought errythn u said waz cute n very sweet;) i will give u 10 starz fa sho!!!!

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