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"My Obsession"
  by A.C.H.


Motivated by the feeling within my chest
Motivated that she one day I will possess
Motivated by an innate feeling inside
Motivated by the thought she will be my bride

Patiently waiting for happiness to be found
Patiently waiting for her to come around
Patiently waiting for the opportune time
Patiently waiting until she is mine

Enduring through daily emotional adversity
Enduring through the physical depravity
Enduring the fact she is no longer close by
Enduring the stagnation between her and I

Remaining fixated on the goal I seek to attain
Remaining hopeful all is not in vain
Remaining focused while other women come my way
Remaining hopeful she will be mine one day

Hoping for a miracle of some kind
Hoping one day soon she will be mine
Hoping my search for a wife is done
Hoping after all I’ve gone through she is the one
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Date Submitted: Jun 23, 2009 (08:02 PM)
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  MzFyne_N_Bless...
09/10/09 (11:06 PM) 
Wow..this is blessed. I love how you have different ways of using one word more than once in a different sentence yet still similar understanding. Very Heartfelt. Ten starz and a fave.

  Lady_Style
08/19/09 (06:26 PM) 
Awww..This has to be one of the sweetest poems i've read in a lil while, love the way you put this piece together, great work xx

  *Jazique*
08/18/09 (12:57 AM) 
Well....I love the structure of this; how each stanza starts wwith the same word....Repetition worked in your favor in this scribe....I love the patiently and remaining stanzas!

  Μz Ρ...
07/24/09 (03:57 PM) 
arrrh how sweet is this! hoping and waiting for that special someone to be yours! you have touched so many emotions in me ...dam i dnt like single no more .. xx great write xx

  Felice
07/19/09 (03:11 PM) 
i like this one. there is still people out here who still believe in love or it even exist. just so you know im all out.

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