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"My one true love"
  by MrPip


I met you at an early age
You started out as just something to do
Something to make my time go bye
You grew on me and I fell in love with you
Your angles and curves started to perplexed me
I competed for your heart
I drove for hours, stayed up late, and was put on punishment for you
I gratuated with, but went to college with out you
For 2 years I was lonely with out you
I had forgotten all about you, then you walked back into my life
I had to learn you ways all over again
You taught me how to finger your holes just right
Just the right touch from me and you would do anything i commanded
I could flatten you out, or move you in any direction, with a tender touch
The revolutions and motions you taught became legendary
You would clean evey alley with no problem,
I always maidsure to keep you out of the gutter
I started to win for you
I could talke all my troubles out on you
You never gave me any trouble about it
You helped me with all troubles
That's why I love you so much, you made me into a man!!!
You helped become the beast I am today
I even got a new name because of
SHOWTIME, one of the best young bowlers alive!!!

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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (05:36 PM)
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  ash_g
10/16/08 (01:33 AM) 
i like this....like the comment below me says..."The fact that this is not about what i thought it was about was very surprising" i like this piece tho.=)

  azgoodazitgets
10/07/08 (03:55 PM) 
I liked this. It's very orignal and misleading. You have put a smile on my face. The fact that this is not about what I thought it was about was very surprising and I think I'll leave the others to figure out what the true love really is but this is special and it's going on my favs. Keep it up. I can't wait to read more.

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