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"my piscean reflection"
  by mariposa


Writer's note:
On the 20th of February
30 years ago
I was born mutable and emotional, compassionate and intuitive
dreamy and realistic, dedicated and loyal
manipulative yet sincere
true feelings hidden behind a smile
sensual and sexual
pleasing and isolated.
Appropriately, I was so named Diva on that day
Now, 30 years later, I can say
Life has taught me well thru happiness and torment
Given me the tools I need to move forward
to live and learn so much more...
*especially now that I am Fortified with Ritchie's strength and love*
I prepare to become an older and wiser mariposa, ready to display my beauty on colored wings
I'm now ready for the next 30 years...

and now, for my piscean reflection, thank you and please continue to read below the pic....

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I take a plunge
Into cool refreshing waters
Feels so good on my skin
Pores open and saltwater mingles
With the cells in my blood stream
Producing tidal waves of emotion
Which carry me under
Into a quiet subdued world
My heartbeat a gentle thunder
In the depths of my ears
Pulsating with rhythmic waves
As I sink unafraid
Mouth falls open naturally
To inhale
And water flows
So fluidly down my esophagus, filling my lungs

~ deep breath in, controlled breath out ~

I… CAN… BREATHE…!

Here within my Piscean element
I have manipulated my surroundings
So I can just be
Here, away from the earthly world
And become, instead
The person I was born to be
Ruler of the subconscious, so symbolic of inner turmoil
My conscious mind stays perfectly aware
Sexuality is aroused
In waters where nothing is left untouched
Imaginations can run wild and free…
I’m weightless,
Sensually peaceful
In my blue world
As toxins flow out my pores
And are absorbed
By saltwater…

An illusionary memory emerges
From the dark depths of watery mentality
Beckons me, begs to be revealed
Coerces my body upward
Until, from just below the surface
I can see him on the dry side
Looking down at me
~A reflection of me~
With eyes that reveal the soul
As they search deep within my soul
It is him, intuitively I know

HE… IS… MY… DUALITY…


Our souls are simultaneously stimulated
~We just know~
A spiritual and physical need
Consumes me, entices him to reach
His etched arms out to me
Elephanic strength grabs hold of me
Embraces me, and together
We sink...
Deep in water...
His fear of water...
Gone… disappeared… vanished… non-existent
He trusts in me
That everything will be alright
Bodies entwine within our secluded world
Euphoric kisses incite tingling sensations
My floating hair caresses our faces
And we shudder, gasp
Inhale water

~breathe deep, breathe water~

WE… CAN… BREATHE…!

Underwater, suffocation will not occur
We are together, fantasies complete
New ones forming
Our imaginations feed off each other
We are lost, in our blue world
Souls brightly glowing a deep passionate red
Consciously submerging
Into subconscious desires
~We can both be free~
To be who we were astrologically dictated to be
Peacefully content in Piscean waters
It’s an intoxicating bliss
Refreshing and exhilarating

~We breathe freely, effortlessly~

While in each other’s space
Held in each other's erotically sweet embrace
In a timeless existence
Bodies defy gravity
And are suspended indefinitely

We are together spiritually and physically

My Piscean soul mate and I,
In our elemental waters of ecstasy.


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Date Submitted: Feb 20, 2008 (01:27 AM)
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  Jdawg
07/23/08 (12:39 PM) 
this is a beautiful write mama, your pen to a paper is like an artist's brush to a canvas. keep it up.

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
07/12/08 (11:38 PM) 
Wow. I truly enjoyed reading this beautiful write of epic porportions. Wonderfully well conveyed. Excellent work of brilliance............

  LadyMay16
06/23/08 (04:49 PM) 
Lovely write fellow fish..def a fav

  xsshkaxmx
04/04/08 (10:35 PM) 
wow this is very deep . great job . this poem touches people in a way that some poems do not . & thats very hard to do . well done . i love it .

  TS
02/24/08 (11:53 PM) 
ughhh....im going to be honest with u..because i got luv for u...i feel like ill never understand the love you seem to have for each other...and u know how they say that...what ppl dont understand...they tend to dislike,hate on, etc...WELL...lmfao..i dont hate it...i just...UGHHHHH..lmfao..no seriously...yall are amazing ppl....this was A BEAUTIFUL poem...but the heart you put into this...is even more amazing...wonderfully done mamita...besitos

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