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"My Razor Did The Dirty Work"
  by Crazy Baby


My razor did the dirty work
All I did was cry
My razor did the lonely work
This i say no lie

My razor did the hurtful work
The scars that you can see
My razor had a secret
Secretly it hated me

My razor did the dirty work
And left me to clean the mess
My razor did the devil's work
As I prayed God bless

My razor did the controlling work
Cause it knew me too well
My razor did the unforgettable work
And it left me in this hell
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Date Submitted: Aug 28, 2007 (08:48 PM)
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  SLICK50
11/05/07 (05:50 PM) 
HOLY SHIT DEEP 10 STARS

  StInA g
09/06/07 (01:51 AM) 
man this was crazy but as real as it gets man... honestly i can relate to this and it aint no joke.. thats y im just grateful that God lets me breathe day after day cause i done made horrible choices in life and felt so low at times where i didnt think i wanted to go on.. keep up tha great writes mama

  Mz_XTC
09/06/07 (01:26 AM) 
wow...i neva read anything like this b4 and i neva knew anyone in this situation but this is a good write and you keep ypur head up and stay positive and remember that if you go to god he will deliver all you have to do is ask and you will recieve

  mykah
08/29/07 (03:41 AM) 
wow lana...love it. you write so well... 10 stars

  Star55
08/29/07 (12:38 AM) 
Wow, that was intense! This piece conveyed so much that it gave me the shivers. It is like I am there watching this girl go through hell. It speaks in volumes to me CB. The last two lines made me stop and go "my god that is so raw!" Just amazing, you leave me speechless.

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