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"My Sleeping Beauty"
  by ~*lyriks*~


I watch you while you sleep
sweat beads glistening
on your forehead
as i read every line in your face

Thick eyebrows shine just like
your long thick lashes
nose flares as you breathe heavily

Theres nothing more beautiful than my sleeping beauty

I pay attention when your lips move
to form the words of the script of your dream
your face smiles while my heart sings

Theres nothing more beautiful than my sleeping beauty

Your fists curl when you feel passionate
about whatever it is
your head turns when youve seen something tramatic

Theres nothing more beautiful than my sleeping beauty

Your eyes flutter open like my very own brown butterflies
quietly watching me watching you and so i reply.....

Theres nothing more beautiful than my sleeping beauty

Promise - Ciara
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Date Submitted: Jul 30, 2009 (03:40 PM)
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  --->QUEENPIN O...
08/13/09 (06:37 PM) 
I pay attention when your lips move to form the words of the script of your dream your face smiles while my heart sings <----now that was some kind of beautiful...damn

  The Truf
08/13/09 (12:28 AM) 
now that's beautiful. straight up. i feel the same way about my girl. like i'm the guardian angel of her sleep or something. i watch her back when she sleeps, and wake her when she doesn't dream of me (nightmare :P). that's one of the most beautiful expressions of love to me. one person trusting the other to hold their back, and actually having more peaceful sleep and conquering fears in the arms of the other. and the other willing to forgo some sleep, comfort, or positional preference for the ...
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  Addicted2Wrdz
08/10/09 (03:04 PM) 
shit a lady callin a man sleeping beauty?! this is a first.. lol i loved the way you diagramed the physical expressions your "sleeping beauty's" makes. this is hot. im hoping i look more than peaceful in my sleep now. 10

  Shani. Medicin...
08/07/09 (10:29 PM) 
A very beautiful and sensitive write..I enjoyed reading your version of sleeping beauty. Much love and respect.

  *Miss Toya*
08/07/09 (03:22 PM) 
oh this was beautiful...i like the way you broke it down...you were very descriptive...the imagery was on point in this write.. fav...

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