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"My Story"
  by Bratt


People saying i'm not living up to my potential
Making good grades is essential
I need to put my cds down and listen to my pencil
Cause my writes are so lyrical
like a preacher being spiritual
Sayin i need to go to college for my writing
But to me that sounds insane so illogical
But stopping me in life its impossible
I'm just like death call me miss inevitable
My mind is too fast for my hand but my writes are still untouchable
well maybe my writing is collegeable,
my vocabulary is just so remarkable,
my emotions i bring out in my writes are out of this world sensationable,
some are tearful some are horrible,
emotions of ignorant people as well as intellectual,
me without my writing or my writing without me is dispickable,
the feeling is mutual also consentual.
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Date Submitted: Jul 09, 2008 (01:59 PM)
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  lazyme35
08/27/09 (11:39 PM) 
you is sick wit it I love this 4real "I'm just like death call me miss inevitable " I'm feeling that line 10*s all the way gotta be a fav

  J Dog
10/31/08 (01:27 PM) 
damn this one was tha shyt. keep it rollin girl. 9/10

  Manudakid
10/07/08 (12:48 PM) 
is definitely collegeable... im finishing up ma shit and i kno ppl around me that wudnt even understand a word outta ur poem~ im luvin the interaction.. :) keep it up mama

  Living Legend ...
07/09/08 (03:47 PM) 
wowowowowo this was a reat write. loved the flow of the entire write ma you doing your thang keep it up

  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/09/08 (03:15 PM) 
hhmmm shoort but i can recieve ya powerful message i got ya onthis one

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