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"MY THOUGHT ON THIS BOY..."
  by Debbie


Ever since we started talking to each other I would have my doubts
At first, I wouldn’t tell you I would talk to my guy friends because they would understand me more
I guess I wasn’t comfortable with discussing certain thing
And I would talk to my other guy friend about anything
In the middle of our relationship we started to trust each other with everything
Near the end you stop returning my call and not trying to call
But I got a text from saying, “Hey how are you doing? And it’s me, Rob, I know your probably don’t want to talk to me anymore because I haven’t talk to you in weeks and I met someone else. And you might know who it is it’s one of your friend’s brother baby moms.” Of course I was shocked then he tells me he started talking to her 2 months ago.
My thoughts during our relationship were kind of rocky like this day you tell me
But I know I’m better than that that’s why I didn’t want to waist my breath
So you broke my heart a little but then you didn’t, because I’m stronger than my emotional feelings
Of course I’m still going to have feeling for you but I’m backing off because you had hurt me emotionally
I just thought about this you mad a promise to me that during the summer you said we’ll make this work
But doesn’t seem this way now
Broke your vow to me

BY Debbie T. 8/7/07
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Date Submitted: Aug 10, 2007 (10:44 AM)
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  Quiet Storm
10/26/07 (07:40 PM) 
that's right, gurl, u shouldn't worry bout him cuz someone like that ain't really worth the time and pain (i kno 4 a fact)...there's alwayz somebody else 4 a person, especially when u go 2 a mall!:)

  sexy.beautiful...
10/12/07 (11:45 PM) 
i feel you what u said about you talk to your male friends more about everything else but then you talk another guy whose may become more than a friend u don't how to go about it....been there still there.....but nicely written

  Quiet Storm
08/29/07 (07:44 PM) 
tell him and u absolutely write with this...keep up the nice write (and don't worry, being single is fun...u can play around!-lol)...anyway, u getting 10 starz 4 this 4rm me

  Speechless Ima...
08/20/07 (08:26 PM) 
deep one, i feel you on this, but never settle for less just to let you know. if he hurt you he dont deserve you, much love

  lil cece
08/15/07 (10:53 PM) 
yea all it means is tht u he dnt deserve u and tht u can get betta...dnt worry bout him

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