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"MY THOUGHTS"
  by P.Y.T


SITTING IN THE HOUSE
STARRING AT THE STARS
EVERYTIME I SEE A STAR
A SAYS TO MYSELF
THERE GO ANOTHER VICTIM
U IZ LAID OUT ON THE GROUND.
COLD BLOODED
SO AS I SITTING HERE I THINK TO MYSELF
HOW WILL I DIED
WILL I END UP LIKE MY LOVE ONES
I PRAY EVERYDAY N NIGHT I HOPE NOT
EVERY MINUTE
THERES A PAST AS I'M WRITING THIS
THERE'S SOMEONE OUT THERE IS SHARING TEARS
OVER THEY LOVE ONE
IF ONLY THE PEOPLE KNO
HOW IT FEELS 2 LOOSE SOMEONE
DATS CLOSE TO U!
IT'S LIKE IF ONLY BUSH WILL THINK TO HIS SELF
OF THE FAMILY DAT IZ PRAYING 4 THER SON/DAUGHTER
TO COME BACK HOME TO THEM
IT'S LIKE WAT BOYZ 2 MEN SAY
IT'S SO HARD TO SAY GOODBYE!!!
I PRAY 4RM THIS DAY TILL NOW ON
DAT THERE WILL BE PEACE


( THIS RIGHT HERE I WROTE JUS TO EXPRESS WAT WAS ON MY MIND FEEL FREE TO COMMENT)

STAY TUNE 4 THE TROY N TUT TRIBUTE. BOTH OF MY BROTHER I'M GON WRITE 4 DEM
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Date Submitted: Feb 05, 2007 (12:42 AM)
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  LG
11/01/08 (02:48 PM) 
man dat jus hit me home cuz i jus rcently lost anotha close cousin

  Poetik assasin
10/17/08 (04:32 PM) 
miss pyt...i completly empathize with you m'lady. and the thing that i admire about this piece is that it is extremely hard to put ones floating thoughts down in a way that others can relate, and you have accomplished that. i enjoyed this

  BlakkStarr
08/27/07 (12:52 PM) 
U AINT ALONE IN YA THOUGHT PATTERN. 10 STARRZ

  sexy.beautiful...
08/14/07 (01:13 AM) 
this was full of emotions and i liked the way it flowed throughtout the poem....keep your head up....it's hard to say goodbye i pray from this day til now on dat there will be peace

  Simple_Guy313
08/11/07 (03:39 AM) 
hmm this was a beautiful written and i love the flow of it and deep but this poems hold alot of sadnees in it but i love it cause its u but keep hope alive and keep the ink flowin cause u got the talent

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