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"My time is now (freestyle)"
  by Class1c
  - This Poem is a response to the poem My Time Will Come (Freestyle) by BLAKK ROSE


OH shit My time is now
I'm the last grain in a hour glass..fifty nine minutes pass....i before i travel others' same path...fall to bottom.....and slowly crash....and i become the past.....I'mma use this last minute...to fight for what i believe in....never had religion...so I'm fuck repenting.....but still i'm asking... for a postive charge.... from whoever's the greater energy in charge then....now....NOW!!!!!! I need to become that spark...that revives the cause....when the truth shock your heart....become the holy light that leads the march....like moses in exodus...expect for this message.....explains that before we can exit....we must conquer our future and past..throw away excess baggage....because this hour glass ...a constant circle... going down the same portal....waiting to be turn over....then i can be the leader....teach how time never slows down....so if you going to start a movement the time is now.....My time is now
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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2007 (03:50 AM)
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  sexy.beautiful...
10/31/07 (02:51 PM) 
creative and a hell of a flow from the beginning to the end i was all into this one great response 10 starz

  CONTROVERSY
10/29/07 (06:13 AM) 
I like the reference to Moses in Exodus, it painted more of a picture than your actual words.

  B. Rose
10/29/07 (01:10 AM) 
Hell yeah this was a hot reaponse my dude... good flow...

  XPERIENCE
10/28/07 (11:18 PM) 
LMAO at brutha t... this was a hot joint here.. i loved the flow

  The-PEn-of-A-M...
10/28/07 (10:19 PM) 
man this shit was derep boo... ypu already know you got talent......talent... umph in many ways......lol.... keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp it up.... boo! ten stars...

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