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"MY WORDS ARE BLEEDING TO DEATH...(A 25 CHALLENGE)"
  by Planted Daisies


MY WORDS ARE BLEEDING TO DEATH...
Area 25 Title Challenge

The stench of death lurks my every corner
Paralyzing my words
Making them lose control
Staging starts and endings to my world
Where the morbid fear
Of losing its existence has buried
The power of the norm
Slicing away at verses
Making them suffer
Leaving hate and torment
Within its mental focus
Dissecting them form words to letters
Causing them to run away
As the hunter comes and attacks it’s pray
Causing my words to bleed to death
Causing them to vaporize
And no longer be seen again…

Leaving me empty
Now that my voice
No longer is there…

Planted Daisies2009
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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2009 (10:05 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/29/09 (10:06 AM)
Author: Group: AREA 25
Poem Title: MY WORDS ARE BLEEDIN...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  Psychosis Aka ...
11/11/09 (02:50 AM) 
i love the dark thats my new genre so my black heart is smiling right now goth is not an easy realm to live in when your personal life isnt there but it takes the pen to a higher level ! nice and eerie i love it

  The Clinician
11/04/09 (06:33 PM) 
A lost voice that can only be heard by the conscious and is avoided by the ignorant. Love your flow poetess.

  Cornfed
10/29/09 (06:51 PM) 
You run naked throught the hills and valleys of deep dark places that ring so clear to a disturb mind!

  คว...
10/29/09 (03:52 PM) 
pretty dark piece PD....you better bandage those words up and heal em....we cant lose em....lol....we need PD's poetry....great execution

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