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"Name it as u Feel"
  by Jaz*


In Dedication....

Feel the need to be more than I
For what reason that is, you steadily try
Your words don’t move me so no need to feel high
I must also imply that there’s no way you can deny
I can sense it all around the way your fiening for this guy
This bond never broken no matter how much hate you run by
There’s a smile deep inside as he calls to say hi

Do as I do and be as I am
But know deep down you can never have my man
She waits patiently for his guard to be down
Sweet tender voice letting him know if need be, she’ll come around
Not making a sound I am the voice that will not be confound
I am the feeling he needs to be next to in order to feel he is crowned
I am the air he will be breath when by life he feels drowned
Like me you are not, precious in my particular ways I am bound

No need to force a competition on a being more supreme

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Date Submitted: Jun 12, 2007 (11:48 AM)
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  mindbenda
10/07/08 (09:47 AM) 
this was hot like how you put it out there your words are sick forreal keep writing that real shit easy ten starz

  --->QUEENPIN O...
01/14/08 (03:37 AM) 
I am the feeling he needs to be next to in order to feel he is crowned I am the air he will be breath when by life he feels drowned ...I KNOW HOW THAT FEELS...AND I KNOW HOW MANY BITCHES WILL TRY 2 GET IN BETWEEN THIS FEELING...GREAT SCRIBE

  Scriptixz
06/22/07 (01:00 PM) 
i've read this 3 times and it got better everytime...like a fresh read *smiles on one side* pure venom and truth spit

  Soultalk
06/13/07 (03:18 PM) 
Another captivating write, the romance in this write was defintely on point, great job.

  nywizdom
06/12/07 (05:23 PM) 
loved the rhyme scheme in this joint. and u and ur pics mama! got a pic for everything huh?

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