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"Neck deep"
  by after vision


neck deep
in the ocean we stand
your hands around my shoulder top
your goods in my hand

pleasure swims below
until you wet the water on fire
clinging to life as I guard your life
ocean deep we fill your desire

neck deep
at high noon the world stares
unbenounced to the volcano that erupts
and the public secret that we now share

neck deep
in this ocean we stand
your hands around my shoulder top
your goods in my hand


after vision
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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2009 (12:18 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Nikki377
11/12/09 (04:12 AM) 
Nice. I enjoyed it.

  Syndel
10/29/09 (07:15 PM) 
Lord have mercy this little hot number right here Wow I like the pic painted and the closed mouth

  no shit.itsana...
10/29/09 (04:13 PM) 
now this is quite the picture. "hands on shoulder top, good in my hand"....thats sexy.

  Tonya
10/29/09 (01:05 PM) 
NICE CONCEPT POET...

  *Miss Toya*
10/29/09 (11:34 AM) 
Mmmm...i would have never thought of this concept...i'm blown away AV...

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