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"*Needy*"
  by Jjonzzie


I wish for love lost, unsure if I can hold on
while my fragile ego, is thrown and tossed
I long for solid ground, someone to put my arms around
I long for peace, oh how I long to just be happy
Someone at last to love me for me
I used to feel these things, when Ithought of you
I used to smile, and long for you to stay awhile
Loving you taught me to be wary, as in my advisary
to never let my feelings get the best of me
I stepped back, trying to keep this engine on track
Sometimes I get so lonely, I wish you could understand
That I need you to love me, want me, need me
At times I feel so needy, allowing you the upperhand
I feel so foolish, so vurnerable, so open
It becomes hard for me to say, that I need you
want you, miss you, love you. Can you feel me?
At times I let my pride speak, another day passes bye
yet I refuse to bend, cause in my eyes that would be weak
Im too strong for you to see me cry
yet I am wanting you, loving you I thirst for you,

I am needing you.
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Date Submitted: May 06, 2009 (03:06 AM)
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  BSavvy
11/17/09 (10:32 PM) 
I know exactly what you mean oh my gosh girl..... Love can make you feel so damn needy at times and you feel so foolish you act opposite of how you feel bc you don't want to be vulnerable it's that damn pride and hell I know all about it girl for real....... I loved this one bc you described me. Have to fav

  goldenshine200...
08/27/09 (02:54 AM) 
this is hot... like how you describe your emotions and the feeling of needing someone... i think everyone can relate to this... write on 10z

  NyamhPoetry
07/14/09 (10:13 AM) 
I've experianced that emotion, and you describe it perfectly

  santiago\\\\\\...
07/11/09 (05:19 AM) 
this one palomita i love it to the core

  Blood Rose
07/10/09 (07:51 AM) 
damn.....10......shit......know exactly how that feels.......yea i nnd 2 do a collab with u after dis

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