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"never forgive you"
  by Silent thought 08


I no longer can forgive the truth.
It hurt me so many times.
I put myself in your hands.
My soul was in your grips.
Time after time,
you played mind games.
Promising me that you mine.
Expressing that our love was golden.
With every kiss from my lips,
you stole a piece of my life.
Sleeping in a bed of lies,
I awoke dead inside.
As I stood in the doorway,
the tears flowed like the rain of the window.
Soaked and cold in a loveless pain,
the memories burn throughout my brain.
The truth replays over and over.
I died when you called out someone elses name.
Stunned and hurt from this pain,
I can never love again like before.
I'll never forgive you for the truth.
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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2008 (01:41 AM)
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  Shar
12/03/08 (11:14 AM) 
there is always a root to every problem... something had to trigger her infidelity, yes she could have ended it the right way... it would have been less painful... but the truth hurts no matter what kind of truth it is. this is a very emotional piece and very nicely written 10+... dont be so quick to trust people keep your heart protected!

  Sirens.Soul
11/26/08 (02:41 PM) 
You tell it brilliantly in this point of view. You sound resigned to that fate with which you foretold. Was this your experience? Remember, just because you forgive, does not mean you have to trust. Be very careful who you trust, to hold your heart. Powerfully written. 10stars.

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