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"Never let me go"
  by angeleyes1
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Cursed Ink Of My Pen by Successful


Never let me go
For I was with you from the start
I dripped deep emotions
Within your loving heart
What would I do
When your no longer there
My ink would dry out
And my heart would be cold and bare
Without you.........
i wouldn\'t laugh anymore
Alone in the darkness
My ink could never explore
Never let me go
Or there will be tears in my eyes
I give you a hug
Just to hear you sigh
You are my everything
From the beginning to end
For all eternity
Our love will always mend
I want your love
I need your hands
Fingers gripping me tight
Strong and tall I will stand
So now poet
Please never let me go
I want to write your emotions
On this paper I will flow
Now I look at you
To dry the tears you cry
Please don\'t go away
I promise to never say goodbye

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Date Submitted: Oct 26, 2009 (03:00 AM)
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  LateefahFreeWO...
11/06/09 (08:32 PM) 
Inspiring Ink that encourages when others need it the most. Magnificent ink well.

  BSavvy
11/04/09 (02:06 PM) 
This was truly heart felt...... Nice flow and it touches one that has someone that they hope never lets them go.... Nice

  restrike
11/03/09 (02:16 AM) 
this is prue genius. pretty much blew my mind. i love the rhyming style presents harmonizing and it truely shows in your poetry.

  *Jazique*
11/01/09 (10:48 PM) 
I agree with B.D. if your an artist of any type and can't feel these emotions that you've scribed here, then idk whats up with that...but i kno i felt it..and this is just amazing

  Browny
11/01/09 (06:16 PM) 
really good stuff here, you just pick up a fan........very good.

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