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"Never Really Progressing...((Pt 1))"
  by JUST_DIFFERENT


In this life, I ask myself..."Am I truly deserving?"
Should I show these scars that I keep preserving?
Maybe take a minute and let out all the hurtin
Or....Am I to leave that for another person
I could never say that I'm "better" than another
So what is it that casts me aside from the others?
Is it the actions I take.....and things I see?
Each affecting the individual after me.....
Daily its a struggle......and who's to say?.........
That the the role I play is little in any way
But some people face more difficult challenges than I do in one day
Do you see my point?....Or am I leading you astray...?
I can't be perfect.....everyone makes mistakes
Once in a while....your heart does break
There's no pause or rewind
Or fast forward through each crime
And for each sin I find..../
That I'm trapped in time
Never really progressing.................
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Date Submitted: Jul 02, 2007 (08:15 PM)
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  loveli
07/06/07 (08:15 PM) 
once again greatness i loved this its like you were self examining you but also at the same time confessin to us i really digged that 10 starz

  Nikkz iZ DONE....
07/05/07 (11:54 PM) 
Yea well KiiMMiiE, RONNA, && NESSA took mah favoriite liine...&& ii`M not liike them...yooh kno` what iit saiiz so aiin`t no waii iin hell ii`M fiinsta type dat iish afta all THREE((3)) of em dun diid iit fa me...chea ii`M lazy...yooh awreadii kno` son...but chea...Ahh Man RoserZ...yooh diid a fuckiin excellent job on thiis hoe

  Blue Sky
07/03/07 (11:31 PM) 
YOOO you never cease to amaze me this is one hot ass poem the is critical and the words were right on cue, but i'm really feeling this its hot it has to be one of my favs.

  TheArtist07
07/02/07 (10:28 PM) 
it's a positive message you send deep within the lines..to read in-between each and pick out the life lessons that we struggle to override each day..whereas, we always find new one's to pursue and overcome..well written

  LADY HYPNOTIC
07/02/07 (10:12 PM) 
AHHHH MAN..WHY NESSA GOTTA GO STEAL MAH FAV LINE..IMA PUT IT ANYWAY.."I can't be perfect.....everyone makes mistakes Once in a while....your heart does break There's no pause or rewind Or fast forward through each crime And for each sin I find..../ That I'm trapped in time Never really progressing................." HELLA DEEP ROSE..IMA BE WAITIN FA PART TWO...

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