now THIS is an erotic poem...i'm tired of peeps with thier "erotic" poetry and it's just straight NASTY! lol...porn on paper, and not artistic at all...BUT THIS????? perfect...in my favs.....
This was absolutely beautiful Ata...passion's remnants captured so softly...lingered, subtle, upon skin...shedded before, embraced after = new skin. Love it.
This I love, such a 180 from my very own erotic pieces, but masterfully displayed, incredible, seductive word play and an overall feel of passion, very nice.
VERY CLASSY, SEXY, SUBLIMINAL, EXOTIC PIECE. I LOVE YOUR POETRY QUEEN. YOU POSSESS THE GIFT OF PRODUCING PSALMS FROM THE SOUL. YOUR STYLE IS UNIQUE AND ONE OF THE BEST I EVER WITNESSED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING...............