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"new skin"
  by ataraxia



i wake
in new skin
laced in passions imprint

muted blues
blushing reds
weave along
hidden hollows

tender aches
evidence
of heat captured
by compliant flesh

i stretch
becoming whimper and sigh
tranquil lids
glimpse shadows of morning
mingling with night
closing
whispering lash
against my cheek

i wake
savoring
shimmering
shards
of recall
as they dance
to echoes of sharp inhale
when lost and found
revealed
in a single
breath
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Date Submitted: Feb 03, 2008 (08:29 PM)
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  Browngrl86
05/18/08 (08:26 PM) 
now THIS is an erotic poem...i'm tired of peeps with thier "erotic" poetry and it's just straight NASTY! lol...porn on paper, and not artistic at all...BUT THIS????? perfect...in my favs.....

  Soule
04/06/08 (02:30 PM) 
This was absolutely beautiful Ata...passion's remnants captured so softly...lingered, subtle, upon skin...shedded before, embraced after = new skin. Love it.

  ghettopoetic15
02/24/08 (06:30 AM) 
o wow i see u have a freaky side spicy piece right here ma had to come back for 1 more

  *Tha Scorpion*
02/17/08 (03:57 PM) 
This I love, such a 180 from my very own erotic pieces, but masterfully displayed, incredible, seductive word play and an overall feel of passion, very nice.

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
02/16/08 (07:13 AM) 
VERY CLASSY, SEXY, SUBLIMINAL, EXOTIC PIECE. I LOVE YOUR POETRY QUEEN. YOU POSSESS THE GIFT OF PRODUCING PSALMS FROM THE SOUL. YOUR STYLE IS UNIQUE AND ONE OF THE BEST I EVER WITNESSED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING...............

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