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"Night Stars"
  by Blakfiya


The Pain (instrumental) - Murs
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If you never saw the stars
Then miracles a-wait stepping out
Nighttime crisp, making breath white
I like clouds formed from chilling
And hands rubbing heat
Creating sparks that warm
::::::I’m alright::::::
Goosed-downed; feathers for no flight
Feeling like through darkness,
One can truly see

the pain…

walking city blocks,
burrowed heads trudging while pressing
stressing these visibly lost lessons
failure to meet eye contact transmitting
they feeling shame

but I’m not a judge

the warmth from my pupils translates hugs
offering gloves for frost bitten minds shifting
while still keeping distance
hailing cabs, catching opportunity
of lights on while thoughts run off duty

the pain…

prevalent in yawning alleyways
while tallies say homelessness is down
and I wonder why the lost are never found
when their amazing grace is all around

that’s when the rain came
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Date Submitted: Nov 09, 2008 (05:28 PM)
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  ComplexConfess...
12/08/08 (11:18 AM) 
In this day and age, it's difficult to come across someone who bothers to stop and look, much less take meaningful notice of these 'night stars' as you've so eloquently put it. The reality of those caught in plights like these is staggering. What's worse, is as you've stated, how they feel about their own circumstances. Makes one think about what it is. It could be a basic emotion that comes with such a situation, or it could be knowledge of what conclusions most people come to when gazing upon ...
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  Syndel
11/13/08 (04:59 AM) 
I cant walk past anyone who is down and out I am that person who wants to take care of them all and to me the rain is the tears when I dont understand the whys of this world reality is a bitch I hate it sometimes

  Fly Lyricist
11/10/08 (10:20 PM) 
Great write, it makes you really apprieciate wat you have.10starz and fav

  Jody
11/09/08 (11:35 PM) 
loved it! def one of my favs... warm and sad feeling in this... kudos, B.

  .Mase Da Rula.
11/09/08 (11:02 PM) 
beautiful ish from the track to the flow of the piece.. incredible.....

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