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"Nightfalls"
  by Raeven


I used to love the night, when all becomes dark and quiet.
It's then when I can be true to myself.
Cos in the night, you describe yourself, not them.
And only then, can you be free.

But now, I dread the night, when the mind is free to roam.
My head is filled with thoughts of you.
Cos I miss you, and I love you, and I still want you.
But you're not there when I call for you.

I used to love the night, when all goes to sleep and are still.
It's then when our nightly chats begin.
Cos in the night, can I freely talk to you, tell all my heart feels for you,
And only then, can our love blossom and bloom.

But now, I dread the night, when my hand is itching for the phone.
I keep waiting for your call, hoping.
Cos I want you back, and I hoped you'd tell me that you do.
But each wait, futile, tears-filled, and so painful.
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Date Submitted: Feb 28, 2007 (11:50 AM)
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  Brokenvegtable
06/12/07 (09:50 AM) 
great write another one of ours i love to read over and over again i think this one will be one that i read alot :) you had your way with words in this one great feeling behind it to :)

  Baby_Delicious
03/11/07 (12:04 PM) 
THIS IS REALLY GOOD, I'M FEELIN THIS

  resonance
03/02/07 (08:15 AM) 
pain is emitted from this ma. your talent astounds me.

  *Tha Scorpion*
03/01/07 (12:25 PM) 
You are an astounding writer, this is a wonderful piece.

  nywizdom
03/01/07 (01:24 AM) 
very nicely written

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