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"nightmares"
by B.R
- This Poem is a response to the poem dreams by B.R

these haunting visions
fears and the abyss like thoughts
cloud me in darkness

with no light to see
trapped..alone..lost in my mind
no one hears the screams

I can't awaken
becuz this nightmare is life
I need to seek light

....to be continued

Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (06:25 PM)

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COMMENTS (10)

pede3392

11/26/08 (10:06 PM)

sounds like your nightmare is hell. and the "light" you seek is religion? just a thought? but great write.

mz_April

11/14/08 (01:43 AM)

wow. I think we all well a lot of us have the daily lives nightmares.

Charly Baltimo...

11/13/08 (05:43 AM)

Wow, you definitely said a lot in just a little. I admire those types of piece's. You are really a profound writer. -Please keep it coming.!. 10 starz from me..

Chainz.

11/09/08 (02:20 AM)

Wow..This painted a perfect dark picture of words and flow this was ill short but it was killed yo..10 stars and I'm a favorite you as a poet no doubt yo.

HoneyB

11/07/08 (12:55 PM)

nice write

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