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"Night's Dream"
  by eclektiq


Eleven yellow eels float by
my head
under an orange gaze
of the lunar eclipse
as stardust lingers in the air.

It makes me sneeze.
It makes me shimmer.

Romantic melodies sung
centuries ago,
I can still hear,
with one ear to the ground
and my heart,
to the man on the moon.
I surrender my soul to you.

The thick scent
of grass and
rotting insects
blanket my body as
I lay, back down,
toward the Earth.
Next to a pumpkin
patch, I can smell
the guts decomposing
into a newer life.
Staring up into the sky,
the stars
invade my eyes.
My thoughts start
to crystalize.
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Date Submitted: Feb 29, 2008 (03:45 PM)
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  x 0h bOi itZ j...
03/22/08 (08:15 AM) 
you truly have a real talent fot imagery. this piece of work is truly amazing. i truly could close my eyes and visualize your words as they were written. as reading the scenery became real inside my head. keep up the good work

  G-I-P (Gifted ...
03/17/08 (05:15 PM) 
The imagery here is just out of this world you def. have talent and I'm loving it you keep that pen flowing sista

  11th Wonduh
03/16/08 (11:39 PM) 
very ethereal. surreal. in my opinion, there is a symbolic reasoning in this write. good piece

  B. Rose
03/16/08 (09:15 AM) 
"guts decomposing into a new life" that line stuck out for me.... it was damn ill yo....kinda like an oxymoron but n ot really

  unforgivenange...
03/04/08 (03:42 PM) 
wow this has great imagery.. I read it a couple of times, and got a couple of different meanings out of it.. Great job, love the way you put this together.. Feeling like its the end of an era and a new beginning death/life coming together, or is it all a dream.. Awesome.. :)

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