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"no answer"
  by African
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Was It Really Love by baller23


baby as i am sittin here in tears
i ask u once again was it really love?
was wat we had love or lust?
i mean i least i thought it was love, but i guess i was wrong
is that wat love is about
u cheating, your lies, u disrespecting me around your friends
them when we are alone u sayin u love me
was it true
wasn't i the real deal to u?
i mean when we first met evetything was gud
long conversation on the phone
u tellin me u loved me
and me sayin the same to u
u makin love to me
and me lovin every moment of it
u lookin into my eyez
and me sayin damn i love u
your hugs and kisses all was gud
but when u take all those things away what left? notin
so once again i ask u was it really love?
stay no answer



(ORIGINALLY WRITTEN BY BALLER23



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Date Submitted: Jun 01, 2007 (08:18 PM)
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  pepsi_colachik...
04/11/08 (11:31 AM) 
thatz whatz up. loving this. Itz classic unique. U bt ya own spin on it. thatz watz hott!

  DEATH
08/28/07 (11:07 AM) 
awww snap now ma, i see you doing big things wit this one, you just blowing it out da water like it aint no thing, madd love for da DEAD MAN on this and trust , u beetta keep up the ggoodd work, or we gonna have some problems, lol, j/p, DEATHreborn!

  NatMcD
07/06/07 (12:45 PM) 
wow i love this joint fa real...ive been thru this so many times in my life and seeing it from your point of view really helped me understand wat she goes thru and that makes the write even better wen we can be in your shoes wen were readn it...nice write ma love it 10 starz

  Cudjoe
06/21/07 (08:57 AM) 
this is swet and your emotions were out so neatly i really liked it

  deandrea
06/17/07 (12:04 AM) 
i can feel u on this one.. it was deep and the feelings were expressed very well... u get 10 starz mama

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