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"No Comment pt.1"
  by porkchops
  - This Poem is a response to the poem skip comments by Ken-l


HMMM...
i lay my pencil down...only to pick up my pen
my flow is like a sharpie permanent no end
winners never quit...quitters never win

i am going to keep writing cause i am paper mate
i spit climaxes
leaving each sheet begging for more...from the front and the back
so i give it to them in the masses

round 3 of the bout
and my punchline syndrome kicked in
spitting jabs uppercuts
haymakers and body shots to the gut

lick here...
and taste victory...sweet and tangy
yes bitter sweet

you think i am gone quit...
you is a _________________
no comment
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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2008 (06:56 PM)
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  Mindfully Driv...
10/16/08 (02:09 PM) 
great response...i spit climaxes leaving each sheet begging for more...from the front and the back so i give it to them in masses...that was ill.

  *Miss Toya*
09/23/08 (09:50 AM) 
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!! you should have told me about this...i love love love this....

  Ken-l
09/05/08 (12:35 AM) 
"spittin jabs uppercuts haymakers and body shots to the gut", dude where how did u come up with that, that is tight, I appreciate the luv, this was one hell of a response!

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