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"No Control"
  by Prettysugar10


How Many Wanna Die (feat. Ja Rule) - Irv Gotti Presents

Explosive eruptions of corrupt madness seekin outlet
Death iz not the way

Thinking dieing is a cowards easy way out
Pushing full blast > nitro injections allowing metaphoric Band-Aids to instigating brain worms to do wrong
Pain drove past the fast speed adrenalin that causes fuse to blow
but speed is to fast not go
Faster!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wreak less
No cruise control
Bold untold venture to the outer zone
History in the making without spoken words
no side*lining flavorish fresh flav clown clocks to hype you on
Go!
Special education for the slow, the Yellow bus has tinted windows
Cool to ride on auto speed
Got the memo
You’ll never catch up to the flow physically
High-speed memories flash by
Cant answers life’s Questions
6 gears “Kit,” says engine needs checking"
Continues to test
Why not?
Can’t die fast enough
Not wanting hell to be the bitch you wake up to…
Accidental?
Pump breaks Gotti... unspoken voices chant
Sounds like some screwed up shit
Headache
“””Stubborn little bitch “””””
The devils spoken thoughts
( ** he smiles ** )
Prayer from the lost
Hoping it’s heard
God is my Shepard I shall not want
Waiting for his answer… At 190 miles an hour
on empty
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Date Submitted: Jul 26, 2008 (05:29 AM)
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  King Sa'Ra
10/06/08 (06:11 PM) 
Deep very deep.

  CC Miller
09/10/08 (11:03 AM) 
The alliteration gave this peice teeth. My favorite line is Can't answers life's questions. my interpretation: can't is the answer so often when we deal with issues of control. good dope

  P-Dub
08/19/08 (11:59 PM) 
HAHA I love it "Special education for the slow, the Yellow bus has tinted windows" oh that's my shit. . . lovin' this write sis! "Not wanting hell to be the bitch you wake up to… " you said that shit. don't be getting me inspired late at night and shit! 10 stars

  touchdapearl2
08/03/08 (07:18 AM) 
wow this was a explosive piece for the mind i felt like i was chasing death with you in this piece but actually scared to catch up with it.....hot write

  *Miss Toya*
07/30/08 (08:19 PM) 
lol "The devils spoken thoughts " you was on the other shit!!!! Miss Gotti is in the building!

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