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"no instruction manual"
  by Esoteric


Pretty she
Came pretty
Packaged
Fully equipped
With
No Manuals

Slightly he
Drifted slightly
Not knowing
What
To do



What was once,
His prize possession
Became an obsession
Until questions of confessions
Became quite
Draining

Pretty she
Came pretty
Packaged
Fully equipped
Batteries not
Included


No Energizers
To revamp her
Tired spirit
Or to boost her stroll
When the walk
Became
Weary

Impatient he
Grew impatiently
Not knowing
Time was
Her
Ever-ready


Uneasily she
Became uneasy
From misunderstanding
Too demanding
Always commanding
He


He became
Frustrated and displeased
With pretty she
That came
Pretty packaged
And once
Kept him
Pleased


Forgetting that
She
Came with
No manual
No return policy
No batteries
To revamp
Her drained spirit

Stupid he
Stupidly disposed
Of this prize possession
His once obsession
Because he
Didn’t realize
Life was the manual
It was suppose to be forever
And together they’re
Love Was to
Revamp both drained spirits


Now his trash
Became another’s
Treasure
Another’s pleasure
Love with no measure

Unlike he
Another realized
That when it comes
To pretty she



Batteries are not included

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Date Submitted: Feb 25, 2009 (03:20 PM)
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  phire fly
04/03/09 (10:00 AM) 
this wsa so slever....too many times poeple don't want to put in work to make sure thier relationship works...it takes alot to recognize what it takes....and sometimes people give up ....well done

  QueenAsia
04/03/09 (04:49 AM) 
love the style, good to read sumtin of that level!!

  DREA23
03/02/09 (05:57 PM) 
I read this but I'm gonna comment again, I love this piece sooooo fucking much tuna its taking me to a place where love used to be.....wow!

  *MaMiLuv*
03/02/09 (05:09 PM) 
prTEYY mE PRETTY YOU PRRTTY WHO DAMN YO SHIT IZ KOO. NOT ONLY DAT IS ALSO TRU.

  IceyMa
03/02/09 (12:39 PM) 
If that isn’t brilliant, I don’t know what on earth is. It was totally out of the box. It was kind of funny though because through out the poem it made me think of toy story. I love your creativity and message. I don’t say LOVE very often to poetry but that was TRULY ingenious! Defiantly a 10!

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