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"No Love"
  by Heavenz_Finest


Love is magic that lies in the air,
but sometimes it hurts they never care.

Love can be nice, cool, and even great,
but then it ends in alot of hate.

It's alot of guys who use love as a line,
girls know the whole package is in disguise.

They say it's a thin line between love and hate,
but the only one who truly loves me can take me away.

For all ya'll bitches in the club liftin' up your skirt,
giving us a bad name when the real women get hurt.

I'll end this poem for all ya'll bitches and hoes,
for the real meaning of love noone knows....
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Date Submitted: Oct 16, 2008 (11:06 PM)
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  *urban^legacy*
11/14/09 (11:37 PM) 
yah homie some women give good girls a bad rap then yah know we do'nt know so we think all the girls at this place is hoes but yah i can see it now from a diffrent place through a womens eyes

  DeepThinker7
01/07/09 (03:28 AM) 
It is always those on the extreme ends that do the most damage to the ones fighting in the middle ot be more respected and cherished than just as a good friend. You articulated your thoughts well with this piece. Nice structure and flow.

  African Queen
11/20/08 (02:27 AM) 
they are ladies out there that have inappropraite ways of spoiling the meaning of love and giving us bad names...you said it well ma

  Dana Dane... M...
11/18/08 (09:45 AM) 
Luv is such an emotional topic and you captured the emotion well.

  williesidney
10/27/08 (04:00 PM) 
Very nice write you do have a way with words just keep using that gift you have ten stars.

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