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"No love making tonight"
  by Chocolate Sunshine
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Wanna Fuck...(yeah I said it) by Chocolatezeus


Loving romancing...caressing
Champagne and candles...
not tonight..
I wanted to pick an unreasonable fight
in a lustful plight
to carnally exite your sexual darkside
I just wanted to take us for a differant ride
I wanted shirt ripping strait strippin
headboard gripping animalistic sick and twisted pounding.
Barbaric slapping ass clappin echoing against the walls.
Sweat pouring strait whorin pussy slapping against cum coated balls...
Fuck me harder with all your ardor...passion will unfold
Do'nt kiss me fuck me like a stranger
rough detached and cold
sore nipples handmarks and bruises on delicate skin
Chokin me out while tappin my cervix
baby you ca'nt win
No negligee no not today
baby
you're in luck
I wanted to satisfy the roughneck in me with a strait up fuck
you'll still be my man after you skin this pussy out
I've been talking alot of shit so
show me
what crime and punishment is all about
gag me with that big ass dick
and make me into your slave
I do'nt listen
show me what happens when housewives misbehave
on the counter
in the shower and on the bedroom floor
leave me longing for nothing
leave my body tired and sore
Now that I see how you discipline me
I'll be sure to misbehave more
he tied me up in rope
and fucked me like a hunts point whore
I was really in luck...
you should of seen the look on my mans face when I told him I just wanted to fuck.
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Date Submitted: Sep 15, 2008 (04:41 AM)
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  JustChuck
11/14/08 (05:45 AM) 
One of the more off the page erotic drops I've read in a while. I can't begin to really express how this got the blood rushing to everywhere and the scenery evoked a somehat urge to take part. This was scary good.

  jdbrown
10/28/08 (06:14 PM) 
sometimes an old-fashioned fuck is needed, hot write

  Zenpoet
09/20/08 (02:44 PM) 
Yeah.....sometimes its just like you described in this write.....just straight primal lust

  BigCl^itHunter...
09/15/08 (02:27 PM) 
This was a righteous poem...oftentimes what your partner wants is to be fucked...making luv takes away energy that could have been better used just pleasing your animal desires..please edit sp's because they take away from the escalation, kinda/sorta like a phone rings just as the pussy eating had ya sooo close to cumming.again your poem was a good read..keep on giving me that twitch when I see your name as the authoress

  Chocolatezeus
09/15/08 (08:44 AM) 
Now that was a hell of a hot response right there. I loved it. If that don't turn on then your dead

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