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"No Love, No God, No Chance"
  by AR-15


She says she's in strong like
I've only heard that in my life once or twice
To her that sounds nice
To me, it's just more lice
Circling around in the air of my feelings
The feelings that are alive and strongly breathing
She knows the word love
But doesn't use and refuses to use
Because she believes in abuse
The word has been beaten to submission
She chooses not to be attached
To the beating that love has been given
By not saying anything shows how she really feels about me
Like most, they barely even like
But it's okay, I don't associate with the unholy anyway
If one doesn't believe in love
Then they don't believe in God
The one who created the word, and everything all around and above
So, time will tell me everything I need to know
If the love is really there, or is it all just another pointless show
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (10:37 AM)
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  Shar
08/26/08 (02:38 PM) 
i like this!

  BIG CHIEF
08/22/08 (07:01 PM) 
Good point ..if you don't believe in love you don't believ in God..thats absolutly true...

  DOMINICANPOET
08/20/08 (10:12 PM) 
If one doesn't believe in love Then they don't believe in God <<<---so are u sayiin u dont believe in god??or u gave up on him cause u told me u gave up on love hmmm thought provokin

  DOMINICANPOET
08/20/08 (10:11 PM) 
this was so deep Shad you threw down ten from me keep em coming...

  D Benitez
08/20/08 (03:22 PM) 
PERFECT!! enough said

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