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"No Ordinary Love"
  by .Archaic.Bliss.


Brooklyn Basement - Tequila Mockingbird




Its abstract
much
like
this song

we
oddly attract

at the most
unattractive
moments

ignoring twisted faces
puckered
from sour love
still reminiscing
how bitter it was
our last sip

tastebuds
displaced
from the
aftertaste


but...


...somehow

we
find
beauty

in every ugly bone
our bodies possess

then nonchalantly
progress
beyond
distressed hearts
strewn apart

simple gestures
become the
needle & thread
orchestrating
the mending of organs
formally
pronounced
deceased


...see
a love
resurrected
through hectic
separate
but equal
chaotic live's
like this

...never ordinary

we love
complex...

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Date Submitted: Jul 05, 2009 (01:04 AM)
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  .Mase Da Rula.
07/05/09 (03:11 PM) 
while I like the abstractness of this piece.... I still find it hard to cling to ur abstractness.. its wierds me out... but nonetheless I like this piece...

  H.H. Holloway
07/05/09 (02:27 PM) 
needle & thread? You're a martian after all, aren't you?

  Reminisce
07/05/09 (01:24 PM) 
love ya wordplay and the rhythnatic flow of this write is NAstY !! JOB WELL DONE FEELINGS WELL EXPRESSED !

  Syndel
07/05/09 (07:42 AM) 
I love the thought of love being abstract that way it gives a out when thing dont go according to others

  Jody
07/05/09 (02:40 AM) 
that needle and thread line... what? loved it! great piece!

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