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"No pity No violins"
  by ARCH ANGEL


My words is all I have
My only shoulder which to lean
I accept the life I live
And with it the pain it brings
Trying to find my own path
And cut loose these puppet strings
So I can then leave the nest
And span the beauty of my wings
I Live amongst the serfs
Dreaming to one day be a king
But it seems I'm just the jester
Not worthy of a queen
On the penumbra of deaths light
In the shadows I'm un-redeemed
In happiness I still believe
Even when it can't be seen

I'm aware that my actions
Have lead me where I am
the pedals of my flower withered
Now I'm just a lonely stem
But I know they'll grow back
As soon as winter ends
And then this withered flower
Will get to bloom again

Its hard to keep fighting
When defeat has made me weak
But I push through the pain
In hope 1 day ill find relief
So when I lose my way
I listen to my pieces speak
And through the bars I read
I lose sight of disbelief
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Date Submitted: Oct 17, 2009 (02:16 AM)
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  BlessedOne
10/17/09 (11:04 AM) 
I really enjoyed this piece. You described a bleak medieval time in the beginning; but I heard the sound of hope in the last stanza. Winter is your prison, but spring cometh. Very good job.

  dagirl2fly4hat...
10/17/09 (10:10 AM) 
Awww I really like...real deep...n keep the pen movin...

  LateefahFreeWO...
10/17/09 (08:55 AM) 
We all fall short sometimes, bu thank God we shall not be utterly cast down. "Why are you so downcast O my soul, put your hope in God." Beautiful and transparent scribe which really needs no comments because you still have hope. I enjoy the flow.

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