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"No Rain Check"
  by after vision


Can you hold
My heart
Can you be
Love- smart

Can you tickle
My soul
Can you lay
Giving me control

Can you look
Allowing me to see
Can you offer love
Free

after vision
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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2009 (12:19 AM)
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  The Mad Poet
11/21/09 (05:59 AM) 
I feel you on this write bro...Nicely done keep flowing...Intense write with such few lines...Excellent topic poet

  jerl
11/01/09 (05:04 PM) 
Yeah, we all want that free love but don't want to freely give ours. That is when the trouble starts. Good write and nice topic too.

  RedLoveSong
11/01/09 (01:46 AM) 
Without conditions...of course...that's the definition of me. Beautiful questions to ask.

  Syndel
10/29/09 (07:18 PM) 
now you know you are begging for a response but I am not going there nope nada no way wit cha hot behind

  no shit.itsana...
10/29/09 (04:10 PM) 
yes yes yes. Why can't people see this is the way to be. I give love with no expectations, man....it just is. I don't care if you become a fucker....though I know you're a fucker (lmao)....I still love the good parts even when its time to say 'peace'!

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