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  by LadyMay16


R.I.P. JMJ
11/1/71 ~ 6/12/04

He hailed from Brooklyn
Epitome of swagger the

Way he walked and talked
As if the world revolved around him
Six foot two wit mocha brown skin

Bountiful locks adorned his head
Ending at the arch of his back
A goatee outlined his full lips
Unending wisdom flowed through those lips
Teaching and preaching
Inevitable lessons about life
Filling minds with knowledge and
Understanding about
Love

He had a way with words that made u
Exercise brain muscles and break shit down from its complex form

Wonderful couldn't wrap him up in one word fore he was
AMAZING!
Silently taken away in the middle of the night

Motorcycle accident they said...drunk driver
Increased her speed and sent him off to meet his maker
Never again to see, speak, or be graced by this beautiful man
Ending our forever the day he took his last breath



MY PRIDE & JOY - BERES HAMMOND
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Date Submitted: Mar 05, 2009 (10:13 AM)
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  big josh
08/27/09 (11:14 PM) 
wow, I'm sorry for your lifeand I'm sure he in in a better place smilin at you

  (Floetic~One) ...
04/04/09 (12:05 PM) 
wow i didnt expect the ending... thatz iz sad... you laid this acrostic out beautifully... great ink! 10 starz

  Jody
03/28/09 (05:00 PM) 
my condonlences is really all I can say... these are just one of those things in life that leave me speechless and deeply saddened.

  Knowthyself
03/27/09 (05:29 PM) 
He was a lost to the world. I feel so much love as you describe him and how wonderful he was. The pain is deep, but the pleasure of knowing him is even deeper. Great write.

  The Mad Poet
03/05/09 (02:51 PM) 
SMH...Very sad, the things we must endure & overcome...You really poured your emotions in this write....Keep ya head up sweetie...You definitely have a friend in me...Much love

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